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 #+title: Community-Lab: A Community Networking Testbed for the Future Internet
 
 * Introduction
 ** Community networks
-- Origins: In spite of the importance of the Internet, companies and
-  governments left behind people and regions of little economic interest for
-  them.  Thus some groups started coordinating the deployment of their own
-  networks for self-provision.
+- Infrastructure deployed by organized groups of people for self-provision of
+  broadband networking that works and grows according to their own interests.
 - Characteristics: Open participation, open and transparent management,
-  distributed ownership, works and grows according to users' interests.
-- Prospective: Strategic importance for the expansion of broadband access
-  throughout Europe (as stated in the European Digital Agenda).
+  distributed ownership.
+- CNs are of strategic importance for the universal availability of broadband
+  networking (according to the European Digital Agenda).
 - A challenge: How to support the growth and sustainability of community
   networks by providing the means to conduct experimentally driven research.
 
-** The CONFINE project (Community Networks Testbed for the Future Internet)
+** The CONFINE project: Community Networks Testbed for the Future Internet
 - Takes on the previous challenge.
 - Project supported by the European Community Framework Programme 7 within the
   Future Internet Research and Experimentation Initiative (FIRE).
 - Partners (list with logos): (community networks) guifi.net, Funkfeuer,
   Athens Wireless Metropolitan Network; (research centres) Universitat